My narrative essay introduction

[Jenny0118]

This is my introduction of my essay and this is my first draft...
I know i have to work it on more....


As she drives, she noticed the sunset is about to disappear. A mother nature is letting us know even she is going to retire from a long day of hard work. The darkness started to warp around the earth like a mother embracing her baby into her loving arm and the sun is giving its last breath before she retrieve into long night. Tiffany say goodbye to the sunsit and enters her house. Of course, she is always greeted by her beloved dog, jasper. The tail of 5 yrs old west terrier is riggling, like windshield wiper lost its control, to let Tiffany how much he was waiting for her. In the living room, a laughing burst into the air and giving a little comfort from the unbearable silence. Yet, Tiffany refused to know what causing her mother amusement. The mother must realize her daughter is home and she sadly ends the conversation; even thought, she wants to continue the conversation with her only childhood friend. She enters the kitchen and she sees Tiffany eating her dinner alone as usual. Mother gracefully sit at the kitchen table beside her and she start to telling what happen to her friend knowing Tiffany is in sour mood. Mother`s instinct always accurate.